Computer Science/Algebra Questline

This is the quest line I have been developing for an Algebra(ish) class.  I teach in an alternative setting so the class sizes are small.  I edited the story a bit to take out names for confidentiality.  I put this all together fairly quickly and I add more as the students progress.  I am usually just one quest ahead of the students.  They love it though.  

FYI the curriculum I am using is from and it is CS(Computer Science) in Algebra.  

I'd love to hear feedback.  Let me know what you think.